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demoralizer
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:29 am    Post subject: Saito Shinichi Reply with quote

Enjoy! And as always your feedback is appreciated.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think this looks pretty good, the anatomy looks on point and his position seems fine too. My only real critique is that his off hand's fingers look a little small, perhaps you could find a better way to represent that his fingers are bending as I think that's the reason that I get that sort of perception.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your exactly right. I have to admit i have been getting that alot. The real explanation has to be the length i had left on the paper. Lol
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Dairius_Chi
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You could always draw his knuckles coming out over the fingertips, if done wrong it might just look like he's missing the tips of his fingers though...

Also, maybe bending the off-hand's thumb might lead one to assume the rest on that hand are so as well
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for your feedback. I tried bending the thumb but it missed the plane when i did. I have worked alot on my hands. They are my weakness when I am drawing open hands. Thanks again.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice. Thanks for posting. Keep up the good work.
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